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Read Me
Contributed by
kailadragon
on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 05:11:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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i'm through with it
to heck with it all
i took a stance
you let me fall
you could care less
i know its true
and i've slit my wirsts
and screamed for you
that's it, i'm gone
you had your chance
you clouded my instinct
with dreams of romance
they were all a lie
don't try to ignore
you beat me, bled me
called me a whore
i'm through with you
i'll love no more
you shattered my heart
right down to the core
just go to hell
and leave me be
so I can die heartbroken
and peacefully
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kailadragon
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2004-09-21 17:11:25]
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Re: Read Me
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by Alovinmann on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 05:17:44 PM AEST
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| I know what u mean......... let it out in writing I do Good Going! |
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Re: Read Me
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by willow_tara72002 on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 05:36:31 PM AEST
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| I liked this , i can relate alot,.i write alot like this, and hope you get get over the person who broke ur heart, i cant get over the one who broke mine,. Great write |
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Re: Read Me
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by eternityandaday4u on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 12:05:54 AM AEST
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| yes i know exactly what you mean in this poem. its a great poem feel your pain. |
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Re: Read Me
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by CoLD on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:25:06 PM AEST
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| wow |
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Re: Read Me
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by staci on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 09:49:24 PM AEST
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| i think you did an excellent job relaying how alot of us feel....great writing...keep it up..ur good |
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Re: Read Me
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by surge_joebot on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 10:55:12 PM AEST
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very good convieing of emotions there, im glad i checked out your work, you are a very deep writer from what i've read so far... keep it up
kia kaha
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