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Asleep Under Drama Moon
Contributed by
Lee
on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 05:04:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Psycheplasm
E
Do you hear the sounds all around?
Do you know the handshake of the clowns
In the little fire truck engines
They'll throw pies in each others faces
Over-sized pocket watches clonking hammers
The common places
Psycheplasm
e/I saw that guy standing over there
He had questionably bendable spectacles
The citable cyclone man has been deem respectable
Psycheplasm
e
Spatial fractions augmentations
Sings sings sings Pegasus mighty pink wings
Psycheplasm
E/
At the pancake breakfast
There are still a few bites left
My stomach lets me know
When I've had enough
Copyright ©
Lee
... [
2004-09-21 17:04:22]
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Re: Asleep Under Drama Moon
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 08:58:17 AM AEST
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Had good ryme to this poem, although I felt oddly confused to the end, you had the rythem, but me must be dumb lol to many big words for my poor brain to translate, but all good in the end.
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Re: Asleep Under Drama Moon
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 12:34:36 PM AEST
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Wow! now this was different! good stuff.
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Re: Asleep Under Drama Moon
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:11:20 AM AEST
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good flow held my interest to the end...but confused the heck out of me sometimes
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