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Life Too Short
Contributed by
stellar
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Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 04:15:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Our world doesn't know the meaning of slow
Or if we move too fast how quickly it can go
So I will breathe this life in completely
And leave all the rest in the past
And I'll take in every breath of mine
As if it were my last
We must cherish what we are given
For they are gifts so precious and rare
Hold on to them with all our strength
While they still linger in the air
Because the day will come when they are gone
And all that's left are still frames in our minds
Be sure to take enough photos
To fill the album of eternal time
Copyright ©
stellar
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2004-09-21 16:15:34]
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Re: Life Too Short
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 04:34:00 PM AEST
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| excellent write and concept. the first and last stanzas are my favorites. i think the first and last have to be your strongest stanzas in the write because of their position and the tone they set for the piece. yours were very nice. lovely photos by the way. |
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Re: Life Too Short
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 04:54:52 PM AEST
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Beautifully written... the last stanza does stand out as the best...
Great poem...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Life Too Short
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by Sirena_Degana on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 10:45:39 AM AEST
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life is too short to dwell on things that don't matter you bring out the beauty of life...in this awesome...let's say...crazy wicked awesome poem
blessed be
sirena |
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