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MOSES' ADDICTION
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 12:46:09 PM in AEST
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"MOSES' ADDICTION!"
Moses was the meekest of all men
Mild-tempered, patient, over and over again!!!
He was almost perfect as can be.
But, he had a bad habit just like you and me?
Power to part the Red Sea. . . . . !
He began parting everything bravely!!!
Carrying his staff with him wherever he went.
While talking he would raise it to accent!
One day he held it up too high
Clouds parted before my very eyes!!!
Pointed at the sun and he said, "Good-bye!"
Darkness descended with immediate shuteye!!!
Moses would laugh, and do it again,
This time he would yell, "Let there be light, Amen!"
One split second and the light would descend!
Moses was kind, he never did this to offend!
Moses was the closest friend I had.
This was an addictive habit, but it wasn't a sin.
Until we went fishing, then he would trick me.
He'd part the water where I threw my hook in------
Just for the record my name is Aaron
Created by
Lovingcritters
ConSue
Sept 21, 2004
"Dry Fishing Smiles!"
It was an addiction, sometimes he just couldn't help it!!!
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Re: MOSES' ADDICTION
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 12:51:04 PM AEST
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interesting poem w/ the pics to prove...liked this one
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Re: MOSES' ADDICTION
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 01:41:35 PM AEST
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LOL Connisue what am I to do your so funny and very talented how could one feel blue
I loved this greatly tooooooo cute
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 01:45:51 PM AEST
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hehehe this was teriffic writing Connie
pixie xx |
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Re: MOSES' ADDICTION
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 01:57:25 PM AEST
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Genius!
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Re: MOSES' ADDICTION
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by 01_zanzebar on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 04:45:34 PM AEST
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Heya, another great poem from my fav auther on YPDC, luv your uses of images as well.
well done
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Re: MOSES' ADDICTION
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 08:01:23 PM AEST
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This is just too cute and funny for words! I will be giggling all evening.
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Re: MOSES' ADDICTION
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 02:43:24 AM AEST
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Haha! Delicious work, gentle and good fun to read! And great cartoons as well.
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: MOSES' ADDICTION
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:54:00 AM AEST
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LOL! I guess he just sorta lost control. You might say he couldn't "part" with this habit.
Love it!
Stitch |
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Re: MOSES' ADDICTION
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by venkat on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 08:08:27 AM AEST
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| what a lovely fun..delightful as always with wonderful pics.enjoyed this..:-) venkat |
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Re: MOSES' ADDICTION
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 12:15:58 AM AEST
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cute and light hearted, all i know is he would have been a great man for me, as he loved animals so much lol, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: MOSES' ADDICTION
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 12:17:04 AM AEST
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| oops, that was noah lol, hey connie maybe i need enlightenment lmao |
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Re: MOSES' ADDICTION
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by emystar on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:21:48 PM AEST
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Very cute once again but look at the brite side.
You could always climb off up in here and catch fish with your hands or a dip net.
Luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
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