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Just This One
Contributed by
thumbsucker
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Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 06:33:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Oh my Lord, please not this one, not today.
So many lights will soon flicker no more.
Would it matter if this flame could just stay?
A second chance to shine on as before.
Couldn`t this name be on a new list?
This one has so much more living to do.
For many of us your point will be missed.
Down here on earth we don`t get the full view.
This one needs help in reaching the shore.
I`m worried there will be no outstretched hand.
I thought I knew once, I don`t know anymore.
I`m only mortal, I don`t understand.
Have to be strong and believe all the more.
This isn`t the time to sing a sad tune.
Miracles can happen, they`ve happened before.
Oh my Lord, please bring this one home to me soon.
Dedicated to all those in need of an outstretched hand
Copyright ©
thumbsucker
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2002-07-18 06:33:01]
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Re: Just This One
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by humphdj on
Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 07:11:39 AM AEST
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You have a great style.....this is magical I loved it.
Rgds
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Re: Just This One
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by chatabox on
Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 06:13:30 AM AEST
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what a wonderful write, you are right though. Sometimes I wonder, why them? what did they do so wrong.
Great write. |
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