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Castles (Cinquain)
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 12:04:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Castles
tall walls
hide dark secrets
look over the land
Castles
Copyright Cynthia Jones
May.18/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-09-21 12:04:07] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Castles (Cinquain)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lee on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 05:17:44 PM AEST (User
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I like this.
Very crisp.
Like a good bowl of cereal. |
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Re: Castles (Cinquain)
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 07:45:44 PM AEST (User
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*grins* Niiice. I really liked the part that went,
tall walls
hide dark secrets
^_^ That's just so perfect and true, in fairy tale stories about magic castles and in life . . . nobody writes cinquains like you do, I gotta say.
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Re: Castles (Cinquain)
(User Rating: 1 ) by arden on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 08:04:00 PM AEST (User
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nice work cynth. i like :D
Arden |
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