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WOUNDS!
Contributed by
Robert_Edgar_Burns
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Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
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Will my dear one keep her promises?
Will my darling ever call?
Will she always think of me,
As unimportant and quite small?
Will finding time to spend with me
Be always such a chore?
If she loves me as she says she does,
Why won’t she give me more?
My heart has stayed quite tattered,
And is often torn to shreds.
But it also has been hardened now,
And feels very numb and dead.
I always knew her answers .
They shout at me each day.
I know she does not want me.
So I shall slip away.
If you ask just what she had of me,
It was always 100%.
But I had zero of her,
So it’s time I up and went!
I’ll go into eternity.
This poem shall be my last.
I feel my spirit sinking.
My time on Earth is past.
I do not want to live without
The love that gave me life.
Perhaps then with my passing,
She can live hers without strife!
robertburns2@mac.com
homepage.mac.com/robertburns2/…
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Re: WOUNDS!
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 12:38:11 PM AEST
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| This was very touching,and beautiful! Great job! Christina |
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Re: WOUNDS!
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by emystar on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 01:05:01 PM AEST
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Hi friend,
I agree that this is good writing and touching but it made me cry...I've come to count on your beautifull writes etc. I've certainly missed u around here.
It's so sad that u have so much luv to give and who ever can't return that luv. I've been there before but I can't give up.
If someone u luv treats u this way, this is the sad part 'cause there are so many women like me that would cherish and nurish your kind of luv...
This my dear is the sad part...
I just want u to know that there are lottsa folks out there that luv u and your writing....
Please try to hang in there for me, Please????
PEACE, LUV,
emy
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Re: WOUNDS!
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by OreO on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 04:18:56 PM AEST
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This is so sad and deep
hearted, i've read many of your
poems that have made me cry
Your love clearly shines through
your words in your poetry
Thank you for sharing
your wonderful talent
I enjoy reading your poetry
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: WOUNDS!
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by Corruptor on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 05:33:03 PM AEST
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| I couldn't have put the words together better myself. It hits the heart head on. Cool. |
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Re: WOUNDS!
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 12:24:37 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem! |
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