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A Single Coin
Contributed by
inoc
on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 07:10:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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He works
day in day out
money is so hard to get
He could scream and shout
so he try's just one coin
in that slot
and it chimes for him
"youv'e won the jackpot"
He is as happy as can be
wealthy at last he says with glee
He does not know
how to stop
and spends the money on things
from an expensive shop
splurges on cars
and extavagent gifts
and lives in hotels
with mirrored lifts
it doesn't take long
for the money to end
He's back where he started from
I feel for Him my sisters best friend
Copyright ©
inoc
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2004-09-21 07:10:15]
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Re: A Single Coin
(User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 07:41:50 AM AEST
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| Good rather unusual but good bernard. |
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Re: A Single Coin
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by Lozza on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 09:13:02 AM AEST
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really good it feels strange as most poems on this site are of self experiences and things like that but this is a great write!
keep it up
Lozza |
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