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LITTLE GIRL SCREAMING
Contributed by
emystar
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Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 12:25:49 AM in AEST
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SultryRose's Signatures
She's so youngcan't even walk or talk.
She'spatiently hid so many years
Tremblimg, tremble silent
Inside oceans of tears.
Little girl screaming each breath
Please take my hand, I know
luv never experienced cause of fear
Let's release fear boldy bid it go.
Neither of us has really touched luv.
It's time to set lonly children free
Only U can ignite inner glo.
Come my prince dance with me.
Time's ticking lonly hours ,see?
Let us free chains from hell
that's tried to take our soul down.
Come my luv, release fears shell.
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emystar
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2004-09-21 00:25:49]
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Re: LITTLE GIRL SCREAMING
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 12:40:57 AM AEST
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| That is beautifull Emy, I am in awe. |
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Re: LITTLE GIRL SCREAMING
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 12:50:30 AM AEST
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very interesting and heart touching also..
hugs..all the best:-) venkat |
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Re: LITTLE GIRL SCREAMING
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by JennyFruFru on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:36:18 AM AEST
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| full of power and pain......... |
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Re: LITTLE GIRL SCREAMING
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 07:39:58 PM AEST
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| Emy, this was wonderfully written. I love the verse. So full of emotion. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: LITTLE GIRL SCREAMING
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 02:32:28 AM AEST
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good work once again, thankyou for the comment on my last poem,( i wan't sure wether to post it or not)
little girl screaming would make a good song title as well.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: LITTLE GIRL SCREAMING
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:19:15 PM AEST
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| Awesome write. This is very touching. Keep writing. |
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Re: LITTLE GIRL SCREAMING
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by Dorian on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 08:20:59 AM AEST
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| Simply beautiful and tragicly touching . . .Dorian : ) |
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Re: LITTLE GIRL SCREAMING
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by Nicole_Rahaman on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 12:35:31 AM AEST
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This is so lovely and your pic is awesome
Thank you for your comments on my poems
Nicole |
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Re: LITTLE GIRL SCREAMING
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:34:00 PM AEST
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| Very nice. :-) |
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Re: LITTLE GIRL SCREAMING
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by Archie on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:32:31 PM AEST
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| Aptly written and the song gives this poem a native american flavor. Very ecclectic |
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Re: LITTLE GIRL SCREAMING
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 02:20:22 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem that seizes your heart... And the music is wonderful too...
Hugs,
Hur
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Re: LITTLE GIRL SCREAMING
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by thewordzwithin on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:08:17 PM AEST
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| Once again, you show your comand of creative writing. Great job and keep up the good work. |
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Re: LITTLE GIRL SCREAMING
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:55:10 PM AEST
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This moved me and thoroughly. It makes me wonder how many little girls grow up with their inner child screaming inside from the past.
A very moving and emotionally packed poem.
Kie |
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Re: LITTLE GIRL SCREAMING
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by suzie007uk on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 09:29:59 PM AEST
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wow so real and full of fealing love it
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