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A Wind in Summer
Contributed by
Mouth
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Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:54:01 PM in AEST
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oops
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Windy days
When the trees dance
Their leaves shake and rattle
Like lover's trembling bodies
Through the twisted grass
Purple daisies in my hair
When the sky is most blue
And the moon is still out
I feel the emotion of the dirt
And taste the summer
Like sugared pansies
That melt on my tongue
And imagine what the clouds must feel
A drift in the infinite unknown
Sailing the sky sea.
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Mouth
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2004-09-20 23:54:01]
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Re: A Wind in Summer
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 12:38:44 AM AEST
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Vivid, beautiful piece. You've painted this very well. Nice work!
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Re: A Wind in Summer
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 04:39:05 AM AEST
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Wonderfully written!
I loved the style of your writing. |
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Re: A Wind in Summer
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by inoc on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 06:47:26 AM AEST
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a lovely poem indeed
keep up the terrific work
cheers! |
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Re: A Wind in Summer
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 08:27:57 AM AEST
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I have to agree that your style of writing is wondrous and impressive. It would make a lovely painting. Words are paintings---except the colors or more vibrant in our minds.
I couldn't pass this one up bec. of the title. I am a HUGE Sinatra fan and I could hear the song "Summer Wind" playing in my mind.
This poem is extraordinary!
Kie |
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