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Contributed by
TaintedOptomist
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Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 10:39:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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take hits to enhance the senses
risk it all to numb the mind
travel around we all want to forget
the kids need to be sedated
seduce this year's messiah
here's the game take it all
metaphors in circles cover insecurity
keep the kids sedated
they don't wanna feel the cold
here's a worthless to take the fall
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by lovesucks on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 10:44:45 PM AEST
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I had to read a couple of times but
"metaphores in circles cover insecurity"
I think got your point across
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 04:13:34 AM AEST
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one word for this: AWESOME. the best bit was:
take hits to enhance the senses
risk it all to numb the mind
travel around we all want to forget
the kids need to be sedated
seduce this year's messiah
here's the game take it all
metaphors in circles cover insecurity
keep the kids sedated
they don't wanna feel the cold
here's a worthless to take the fall
wait, it was all good |
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by Rissa on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 03:59:20 PM AEST
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| I've read this before, but I think I got more out of it the second time. Interesting read, Klay. |
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:50:31 PM AEST
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Amen to that..
that was amazing
hit the spot indeed
bullseye infact
5/5 x |
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