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Selfish?
Contributed by
Roshie
on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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One tear soaked letter,
One blood coated knife.
Was all it took,
To end your life.
Tears stream down my face,
Like pouring rain.
I feel so alone,
Things will never be the same.
How could you do this?
I have always been there.
Why are you so selfish?
You know that I care.
As I looked down apon you,
My body goes numb.
How could you be so stupid?
How could you be so dumb?
You were all I have left,
In this screwed up life.
Now I have nothing,
So I pick up the knife.
Best friends stick together,
I say in my head.
Best friends stick together,
Alive and/or dead.
The blade is sharp,
It cuts with ease.
My body feels weak,
I can no longer breathe.
Am I being selfish?
I fall to the ground.
Am I being stupid?
No longer is there sound.
Copyright ©
Roshie
... [
2002-11-09 09:00:00]
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Re: Selfish?
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 10:38:08 AM AEST
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There is only one thing
that this reminded me of
which is the word "Silence"
it was a poem i read today
here and that's what it was
called, that's what this poem
reminded me of
This is so sad and full
of such deep emotion
I enjoyed reading this one
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Selfish?
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by Vampy on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 09:38:54 AM AEST
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| Wow.. this was so sad, but full of emotion. Excellent write. I enjoyed this... |
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Re: Selfish?
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 06:32:53 PM AEST
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Extreamly sad. I can clearly feel the pain in this poem. It is very good though.
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Re: Selfish?
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by orgygirl on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 08:29:35 AM AEST
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This flowed. It was an excellent write, so powerful, so much emotion. This really hit home. Thank you for sharing.
Take care
R. |
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Re: Selfish?
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by Yellowrose on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 10:47:40 AM AEST
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| What a GREAT job you did composing this poem. You have TALENT. Blessings ! Yellowrose. |
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Re: Selfish?
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by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 09:49:23 PM AEST
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This is a good poem, ful of emotion. I'm sitting here hoping this didn't actually happen to you. For if it did then all I can say is that I know how it feels to lose a friend in these circumstances.
YS |
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