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Endless Pain
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 10:28:56 PM in AEST
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Endless Pain
I'm packing away these memories
Forgetting what will never be
Moving on from what I didn't have
A future with you that started in the past
It doesn't matter if it wouldn't have happened
That door is closed forever
Shut and locked with heavy metal
Locking away opportunities
And never existing memories
What I used to be
Is a part of me
I must leave
Or I'll be reliving
What has happened
Getting trapped
In my past again
Feeling causes endless pain
But without it we can't live
Something has to give to be taken
This endless pain
Has me tainted
I can't lock it away
With heavy metal
It never fades
It's all I go through
Since it won't go away
I'm lost to it
Now and forever
It has me tainted
What the past has created
Is the end of me
In endless pain
As a memory
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Re: Endless Pain
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 10:42:57 PM AEST
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This was brilliant and written very creatively.
These two lines really jumped out at me for
some reason
Feeling causes endless pain
But without it we can't live
Its so simple and true. Once again I enjoyed
this.
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Re: Endless Pain
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by savedbydeath on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:23:47 PM AEST
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yo sup?wow the endless pain has a time in everyones life, no worries u'll get through this,if i can i think anyone can and i'm blond so its all good,no offense to anyone blond,i'm just a tit and tease myself LOL,awsome write i enjoyed it i think its 1 of ur better 1's but u have sooo many good 1's i cant quite pick 1 right off the bat,later luv ya!!
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Re: Endless Pain
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by MoonbeamBaby on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 08:54:27 AM AEST
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Loved it, its so true about pain , we cannot live without it. It is what makes us whole. Thanks for the comment on mine.
April :) |
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Re: Endless Pain
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by Stellar on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 12:28:06 PM AEST
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| Some pain is so deep inside us that it becomes a part of us. It's almost like without it, we wouldn't know who we were. Beautifully written! |
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Re: Endless Pain
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 01:50:40 PM AEST
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| I feel the same way sometimes. The way we deal with pain often shows what type of people we are. |
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Re: Endless Pain
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 04:08:27 PM AEST
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| WOW!!! I'm amazed by the way you write. Very good reading. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Endless Pain
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by AndTheFoolShallBurn on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:56:17 PM AEST
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| I love the wording...honest, and something I should say to someone myself... |
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Re: Endless Pain
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:56:27 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written. Awesome poem. |
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Re: Endless Pain
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by TaintedSoul on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:40:31 PM AEST
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When it feels as if the soul has been ripped from within, we are left with an ache that seems to be eternal. Yet, just when we think the shades will never lift ... they do and the cycle begins once again. A tragic write that blends emotions with a dying hope nicely. Enjoyed!
peace
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