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The Rath Of Fate
Contributed by
xfrozenwindx
on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 09:46:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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It all began,
The wind roared and the waves crashed down upon the bay.
Pain and misery released.
The blood ran cold.
Surrounding is a darkness,
Then everything grows calm.
The wind whispered and the water turned still.
It all ends.
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xfrozenwindx
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2004-09-20 21:46:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Rath Of Fate
(User Rating: 1 ) by TaintedOptomist on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:45:22 PM AEST (User
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from nothing to chaos to nothing again |
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Re: The Rath Of Fate
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 04:24:45 AM AEST (User
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interesting.. i like it! |
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Re: The Rath Of Fate
(User Rating: 1 ) by Adam_me2 on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 04:13:37 AM AEST (User
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gd use of contrasts |
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