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Dark Heart
Contributed by
tractorbabe
on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 09:02:45 PM in AEST
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deep inside
anger floods my heart
no longer can i see
my soals torn apart
all along the
jagged edge
my heart it bleeds
so close to dead
the dripping blood
slowly feeds
on every living
memory
torn apart
ripped in two
theres only so much
some one can do
please dont ask
or try to see
the pain that comes
with in me
Copyright ©
tractorbabe
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2004-09-20 21:02:45]
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Re: Dark Heart
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 09:10:03 PM AEST
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This piece of work (exception of 1 misspelled word) is excellent and relates perfectly to my life now. Your imagery is great and I felt this deep into my inner being.
Rita |
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Re: Dark Heart
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by xfrozenwindx on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 09:16:46 PM AEST
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WOW that was a really good poem. It was soo real like I could see it. Very very very very good! I loved reading it soo much!
-Ashley |
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Re: Dark Heart
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 09:34:08 PM AEST
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This is excellent work! It's like each line feeds off the other... and the imagery and the emotion... WOW!! Can't say enuff...
Great write... keep it up!
~Donna~ |
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Re: Dark Heart
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:38:34 AM AEST
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| You are a natural and your creative word art is awesome. I really appreciate good poets who inject emotional reality into their poetry. Thank You for sharing your wonderful talents with all of us and please keep the ink flowing. Please have a peek at some of mine and let me know. Mickey Pig Knuckles :o) |
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