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no one sees
Contributed by
tractorbabe
on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 08:55:56 PM in AEST
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The pain that
no one sees
is the pain that
she belives
will help her
out of misery
will find her
in company
the pain that
they dont see today
will start to show
in hate some way
she'll let them
see eventully
they'll watch her bleed
with insainity
they'll see then
wat the pain has done
and wat these scars
have now become
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tractorbabe
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2004-09-20 20:55:56]
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Re: no one sees
(User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 09:10:04 PM AEST
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WOW!!! This reminds me of a friend of mine... especially the 1st 2 stanzas...
The pain that
no one sees
is the pain that
she belives
will help her
out of misery
will find her
in company
WOW! That sounds just like her...
Great write! U've captured alot of emotions here...
Keep writing...
~Donna~ |
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Re: no one sees
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 09:11:50 PM AEST
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Your work is great and I am very impressed but you need help with spelling (sorry, pet peeve of mine). Otherwise this would be perfect.
Rita |
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