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Silence
Contributed by
wrn
on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A new life
Safe and secure in the womb,
Knows nothing of the world,
And still forming ears hear
Silence.
A young child,
the morning spent in raucous play,
Without any cares, succumbs to a nap,
and for a time, the house knows
Silence.
A young mind,
Eagerly absorbing new knowledge,
With books open before him,
And his mind racing, the room is in
Silence.
In young love,
Two people joined together in embrace,
Thier heartbeats settle, no words needed,
With eyes closed, they enjoy the
Silence.
In the bed,
Laying next to what was the love of his life,
As a tear falls onto the pillow,
In total frustration, there now is just
Silence.
In maturity,
He pours out his heart, lays bare his soul,
But his hopes for happiness die,
As from his paramour, he hears only
Silence.
And now,
At the end of his mortal life,
His mind asks "Was I worthy?
Did I make a difference?"
And the answer is
Silence.
Copyright ©
wrn
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2002-11-09 07:00:00]
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Re: Silence
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by nightrider on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 07:03:31 AM AEST
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| this is really deep, and i really got alot out of it. thanks for sharing it with me! |
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Re: Silence
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by OreO on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 07:06:25 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful
I've not read anything like
this before, Silence says
many things alot of times
and sometimes it says
more than it should
Beautiful write,
Thanks for sharing this
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Silence
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by KM on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 04:47:14 PM AEST
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| Very impressive! I like the insight and the sentiment especially... but the way you've structured it is wonderful. It ties everything together beautifully. |
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Re: Silence
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 05:48:45 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC... You have written a very powerful and beautiful poem here.. Such a thought provoking write...
Jenni |
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Re: Silence
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 05:17:00 PM AEST
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| Wow what a beautiful thought while laying in bed! I truley enjoyed reading this peice,as your oyhers!Christina |
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Re: Silence
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by Lia on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 03:10:30 PM AEST
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| wow..this is a silent message heard loud and clear that many ppl can relate to. This is a great poem!! |
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