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Death and I
Contributed by
Solmyr1404
on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 05:38:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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And once again
Death becomes me,
And I Death,
Seemingly for eternity,
For it comes
And becomes;
It destroys and recovers
My soul,
But now it dwells
In the final moments
Of my dying sanity,
For without her,
There can be no sanity for me,
And now I am left vulnerable
In the degrading condition
Of my mind.
No one helps,
They choose not to,
But they can not help,
For I am beyond it.
I simply take another drink,
Another drag,
To forget about her,
Put the barrel to my head
And pull the trigger
With the safety on.
Suicide:
Not a solution,
Not an option,
Just a way to toy
With the feeble-minded.
When will she return to me?
When will she cease
This [-] masquerade?
When will she quit
[-] with my head?
Why doesn't she just go on ahead
And [-] kill me?
But even as I scream
These pointless questions, I know
She won't quit
Until Death completely becomes me,
And I, Death.
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Solmyr1404
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2004-09-20 17:38:44]
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Re: Death and I
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 05:40:55 PM AEST
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| THIS IS GREAT! I really liked this one, I cannot remember a poem that has grabbed such as this. |
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Re: Death and I
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by shelby on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 05:47:38 PM AEST
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woawwwwww intense write so deep sad and haunting I dont know what to say I give free hugs so heres a big one might make you feel a little better all I can do is try.
Michelle |
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Re: Death and I
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by kailadragon on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 06:29:53 PM AEST
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| its dark and scary.......and i'm afraid to ask who it's about |
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Re: Death and I
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 09:35:25 PM AEST
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| great write. keep up the good work =] |
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Re: Death and I
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 01:27:03 AM AEST
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| Yes, I know the feeling well, just waiting for that day ... this poem, I completely relate to ... well written ... Jan |
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Re: Death and I
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by shorty_52 on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 08:14:10 PM AEST
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and we r back to the sad depressing stuff. good poem though. just depressing. and any one could help all u hav to do is ask for help. i'm here if u need to talk,:D as usual:D. well i'll talk to u later.
~allyson~ |
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