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hello stranger
Contributed by
purplestary
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Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 05:23:48 PM in AEST
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words cannot explain
the feelings i'm getting now
their so new but so old as well
it's been at least a year
maybe even two
since i heard that welcoming hello
i hear it loud and clear
yet i ask if he's still there
just to give myself a chance
to awaken from a dream
he laughs aloud and says "of course"
i say hello in an awkward
form
as if it was the first hello
i've ever said before
and so it all begins again
i'm talking to a stranger
telling him things a stranger
shouldn't know
and yet i feel compelled to tell
him everything i can.
it's the same as the first time
i said hello to him
yet different in it's own way
I knew him before
but it's been far too long
i must start all over again
and so something new begins
with a long forgotten past
and now i'm talking to a stranger
telling him things a stranger
shouldn't know
yet i'm so compelled
to tell him everything i can.
so that way i can sit here
and write this down for all the world to read
so every STRANGER that i KNOW
can read stuff about my life
they probably shouldn't read
and yet i feel compelled to tell
the world everything i can
so in closing i say this:
HELLO STRANGER
Copyright ©
purplestary
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2004-09-20 17:23:48]
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Re: hello stranger
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 05:34:45 PM AEST
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| nice poem, and thats cause we rather talk to strangers about whats going on then our own family. |
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Re: hello stranger
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by Dusty on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 06:25:01 PM AEST
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I loved this one. It was cute and witty there at the end. Isn't that why we come here? There is a wonder in being able to spill your guts without regret to people you have not yet met. Oops.
~Dusty~ |
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Re: hello stranger
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 08:39:08 AM AEST
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I was very impressed with this poem because it isn't one I see every day.
Inside we all probably long to say--hello to a stranger and that person be the love of our lives.
I thought you did a fantastic job on this one.
Kie |
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Re: hello stranger
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:32:01 AM AEST
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| I want to let you know I really appreciate your wonderful style and the awesome picture you create through words. You are a natural and thanks for sharing your talents with all of us. Please have a peek at mine and let me know. Mickey Pig Knuckles :o) |
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Re: hello stranger
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by LouisaMontagu on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 10:21:25 AM AEST
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| well done, brilliant write xxx |
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Re: hello stranger
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by punkprincess6689 on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 11:52:26 PM AEST
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| that was rly good. keep writing |
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Re: hello stranger
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by freckle on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 06:59:36 PM AEST
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Nice muse...I like it...and I've been there too!
Carol |
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Re: hello stranger
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by KaylaNoelHohn on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 01:21:55 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed the way this poem was laid out..i absoultely love it. Thank you for posting.. |
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Re: hello stranger
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 07:28:27 PM AEST
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Cool I like how you put this one together its a unusal write. Very good thinking.
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