|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Wed, Rites And Blues
Contributed by
01_zanzebar
on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 05:16:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
political
|
Profit form my legacy
-it'll befall you only loss
the pride of briton
-i couldnt give a toss
insustained thermal heat
-indirectional floss
rolled up toothpaste
-soggy marches, dirt and peate
a land of mist and sleet
-bloody sand lined shores
sewage sprawling on the streets
-houses full of perverts and whores
-the empire too...
doesnt mean nothing to you
-held together with totalitarianism
as strong as paper and glue
-despotic un-line rulers
bending their own rules
-turning out listless lies
its britains wed rites and blues
-from incestuos monachy
to drug moneyed knights
-no such thing as been free
this is what Britain meens to me
C-E churches pues
-and Giro bank ques
childrens looney toons
-blighty coloured balloons
blackpool slouse beach
-our youth drinking bleech
theres a millions lessons
-that we do not teech
and a thousends outcries
-that are never heard
land of only blood and honour
-land of townies, trendies and the dollar
spear holding women aside a sheild
-the young cubs aid the old lion
sent to cubs off to die in a begotton field
-school chrildren told to keep their tie on
a whistle stop tour of last years lies
-fighting in the streets at night
the BBC, only window for the nations eyes
-propaganda, deciete and immoral *****
a sickly scent of those who are yet to die
-lonley in pensioner homes cold at night
you'll of heard all these thing on the news
its just britians Wed, Rites and Blues
Copyright ©
01_zanzebar
... [
2004-09-20 17:16:26]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Wed, Rites And Blues
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 05:52:02 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
You have weird style, and I like it!!! Join me?
THis was fun to read, and well worded, I liked it very much. Keep 'em coming. |
|
|
Re: Wed, Rites And Blues
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:40:40 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Snappy is right Zanz.........really different, but well planned. Worded just right. Alot I don't understand, but then if you do........that's all that really matters!
You can without a doubt come up with the craziest stuff..........marvelous creativity......some day I hope to be up with you......you're just too far ahead of your and my time! *smiles*
hugs
consue |
|
|
Re: Wed, Rites And Blues
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ripper_Something_Unusual on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 02:46:40 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Here we go, at your prime. Take away all the sexual prefference poems and look at the more creative things that you come out with. Very god write, but not angry enuff, it sounds almost mournfull not energetic much. Anyway keep up the good work!
Ripper |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
