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Just an actress
Contributed by
emocutie07
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Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 03:46:54 PM in AEST
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Broken and too tired to pretend
If only for one night I could show the real me...
Untuck the teardrops, and wipe away the lipgloss..
Reveal my flaws, every scar
Throw away the ropes that tie down this perfection
I would be just an actress to you, rehearsed lines,a staged love affair
Only no Oscar for this production
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2004-09-20 15:46:54]
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Re: Just an actress
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 03:51:32 PM AEST
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Yay I'm the first to read this...This was really wonderful, and needs no work at all, what matters is that this came from your heart...Again amazing...
Love always and forever
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Re: Just an actress
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 04:42:49 PM AEST
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I agree... this needs no work at all... this is wonderful... u r a good writer... don't sell urself short...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Just an actress
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:17:05 AM AEST
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I like this
It is good |
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