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I HATE YOU!
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 03:32:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Death at my heels,
Fear taking my last breath...
Where do I go now?
Am I to hide forever?
Masochistic pain is what you give me...
I shed my blood, tainted and dark,
It spills at your feet,
You aren't satisfied...
I’m never good enough, am I?
Rip me open,
Look inside…
Is there anything in there that appeals to you?
All there is is hatred, malevolence, and morbidity…
I’m revolting, aren’t I?
I’m wretched and hard on the eyes?
My attitude is too much to handle?
Well guess what?
I don’t give a flying fish, you bastard!
All you do is criticize and ridicule,
Make someone else feel worthless…
We all know that deep down inside you,
There is only self-pity and insecurity…
Dreadful disease that inhabits me,
Endless torture, these thoughts of you...
I wish it would end,
So I could get away from you…
I’m not good enough for you,
I never was…
I looked up to you when I was a little girl,
You were my idol!
I wasn’t smart enough,
Or pretty enough to compete with the other girls,
Although you claimed I was…
I was your trophy to show off,
Pride and conceitedness taking over you,
A side I have never seen…
As years pass,
I finally realize,
You thought you were there to guide me,
You were only in my way!
Set me free!
I carry your heavy chains for you,
I do all of your dirty work so you can stay clean and look innocent…
You are nothing but a piece of sh*t to me!
Look! LOOK AT ME IN THE EYE!
I'm not the same, am I?
Not the same precious, pure little girl you used to have..
It's your fault, you took my innocence away you bastard!
But you enjoyed it, didn't you?
ADMIT IT! YOU DID!
DON'T SHED TEARS, YOU PIECE OF ****!
If you regretted it so much, then why?
Why ruin me more than I already am?
Why destroy the lives of my cousins in the process?
My life is a wasteland, plains arid with depression...
I HATE YOU SO MUCH!
I hope you die a harsh death,
And let it be by my hands...
Oh, how I wish to kill you,
Suffocate you,
See you beg at my feet for my mercy...
There is no mercy in me...
I will be ruthless, I will be mean,
I'll be just like you!
I'll finally destroy you, at last, there will be peace!
I won't go to your funeral...
I won't give my respects...
I won't say how much I loved you,
Because I don’t...
You aren’t a father of gold, like my grandmother tells me you are...
You don’t love me, like my grandmother believes...
"Oh God, please save me!"
Tough luck, Daddy...
God isn't going to hear your pathetic cries...
He knows what you did...
You won't be forgiven, you won’t be cleansed...
I hope you burn eternally in Hell...
May the hounds of Hell tear you limb from limb,
Eat every inch of you...
No more **** with me,
No more lies,
No more you...
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FleurdeSang
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Re: I HATE YOU!
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 06:53:06 AM AEST
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This was so full of pent up anger it seeped from every pore.
He must have made you feel so unloved and lowered your self esteem to the floor as a child.... for you to feel this way.
You are an adult now and forgiveness is the hardest thing to do. But it will release you from these chains. Anger causes hatred and hatred eats away at your soul.
You have been hurt enough do not hurt yourself no more
Release the anger free yourself from the
pain inside.
Then and only then will you feel at peace
A very powerful deep write. Superbly written
Take care
Love Sweetangelukxxx
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Re: I HATE YOU!
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 10:50:19 AM AEST
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i feels like my thoughts has been transfered onto this poem,its exactly how i feel,exactly how he is,and iam sorry for what he's put you through,and your right to stand your ground,dont let him ruin what you've got your still the same,your innocence is still there,however broken it may seem
great poem
love han xx |
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Re: I HATE YOU!
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 03:37:01 AM AEST
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Oh, I felt that !! I will never be able to understand the way you feel. I can certainly be supportive and empathetic. Steph, he will be judged. You need not worry of that. He will answer for his indescretions. I am certain that you know this. I know not what to say, but have once again been inspired and feel Anna's direction to write. I look to a crescent moon and whisper a silent prayer that you be released from this pain in life, by life ... by love. I beseach her children to restore hope.
Your devoted affectionado
Nazmythian ~ |
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