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Whispered secrets and Dead eyes peering through the glass
Contributed by
kailadragon
on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 03:08:48 PM in AEST
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Here I sit
straitjacketed
in my mind
and hearing the whispered secrets
while dead eyes peer through the glass
watching my every move
whispering insanities
making me worse off
than I already was
cut off from the world
from inside my mind
stuck in this repeating plase
of fine, and wrong
all over this life
Copyright ©
kailadragon
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2004-09-20 15:08:48]
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Re: Whispered secrets and Dead eyes peering through the glass
(User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 05:00:06 PM AEST
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Yepperz... what a strange dream... but the mind is like that that in dream state... it doesn't make any sense most of the time...
Ur poem captures that... it's like on moment in time that the mind saw... great concept... I loved it!
~Donna~ |
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Re: Whispered secrets and Dead eyes peering through the glass
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by alexb on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 09:12:25 AM AEST
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| very haunting and emotional, very good |
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Re: Whispered secrets and Dead eyes peering through the glass
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by justjonesy on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 06:55:36 PM AEST
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| definately different....haunting yes...dream-like also...good job |
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