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Will I Be Empty?
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:08:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Will I be left feeling empty?
When I’ve been used to plenty,
Of fears & hurts I once held inside,
Will it feel like a part of me has died?
Is it daft to be scared to finally let go,
Of something harmful, yet something you know,
This thing is known to you oh so well,
The thing I speak of has put you through hell.
When it’s all gone will I just stop?
Feel so hallow that I just drop,
I think my fear has kept me going,
Yet nothing good to me was it showing.
Fear that’s been buried for an age,
Makes you frightened to leave your cage,
You can become institutionalised,
To be free can turn into a nasty surprise.
Maybe I should keep hold of it all,
If I let go will I then suffer a fall?
Will I end up a shadow of my former self?
Will it be more damaging to my mental health?
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Re: Will I Be Empty?
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by Alovinmann on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:12:09 AM AEST
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Nice I have battled these same thoughts. THANKS
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Re: Will I Be Empty?
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by faffeee on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:32:38 AM AEST
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| nice to see other people feel this too, (and write about it very well!) i always think about this, written some poems about it too. good luck xxx |
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Re: Will I Be Empty?
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by brew on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 12:05:04 PM AEST
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| we ll go through that..........its just not fair at times..........thanks for writing another good write |
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Re: Will I Be Empty?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 12:15:19 PM AEST
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No, but you will have an insatiable need to fill it with love and happiness for the rest of your life. You will be very glad you did and wonder why you held on to it so long.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Will I Be Empty?
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by Bruce on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 01:17:24 PM AEST
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| Again pixie, WHY |
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