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it's over
Contributed by
darkeyedman
on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As she pops in a cd of the newest band that’s all the rage
I begin to give serious thought to dating women my own age.
A figure that defies gravity is such an amazing, sexy sight,
But I tire of hurting all day and sucking in my gut all night.
She is energetic and tireless and loves to try something new.
I want a lover that is passionate and then falls asleep before I do.
My friends think I’m a fool not appreciating what I’ve got,
They say she’s cute, she’s smart, the sex is hot.
I admit to having some pride that she is all mine,
But if I hear "Genie in a bottle" one more freakin’ time….
It’s over.
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darkeyedman
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2002-11-09 03:00:00]
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Re: it's over
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 03:44:33 AM AEST
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cute write,I liked it! I can imagine that its hard the age difference is large!!! Your friends arent dateing that person so if its not what you want you need to let them know & move on!
Good luck! Christina |
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Re: it's over
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by OreO on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 04:12:28 AM AEST
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Oh my god this was so good
I laughed so hard at the genie in
the bottle line, and i know it's not
even funny the way this poem
is going but i couldnt help it
this was a good write, i really
enjoyed this,
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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