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innocent heart but without heart beat.....
Contributed by
veenu
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Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 06:43:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i know iam wrong,
titling my poem so strong...........
thinking a way wrong,
but my dear how to undergo the pain........
still blood on the wrong vein,
make me to breath hard again..........
and what can i say about my brain intangled,
without your care,
replaying the past ,
and sometime say,
thats not fair................................
i love u i love u why u dont care...............................
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veenu
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2004-09-20 06:43:39]
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Re: innocent heart but without heart beat.....
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by brew on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 10:15:19 AM AEST
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| Love is a very strange and sometime.........hard thing to explain.ppl shy away because they become scared. liked the write tho |
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Re: innocent heart but without heart beat.....
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by alexb on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 09:39:24 AM AEST
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| very sad. i know what you are feeling, believe me, great poem |
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