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Dying Desire
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:07:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Dying Desire
Burning me inside
Burning me till I die
The reflection of my appearance
Shows what's inside
What's within
Is burning desire
To die
My heart is singed
From this fire
Blackened like night
With no hint of light
The fire burns me till I die
Ashes left behind
From a former life
Burning till there's nothing left
Ashes of what I used to have
Once upon a time
The light left my soul
For forever more
Nothing was left within
Goodness left to be sin
I lost everything that mattered
While dying one day at a time
Only darkness fills my life now
The light in my soul burned out
Left alone
Dying on my own
Like my soul
Died before
My desire fulfilled
When me it did kill
Ashes left behind
From the nothing inside
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Re: Dying Desire
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by TwEeK on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:32:26 PM AEST
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so your desire to die is killing you from the inside out. humm..interesting.
good poem, i liked it.
its dark, it flows.
keep on writin'!
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Re: Dying Desire
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:36:06 PM AEST
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I liked how this was written. I also liked the
constant use of the word "ashes" because to
me it symbolizes all that you once had is now
gone. Beautifully done... not sure what else to
say.
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Re: Dying Desire
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by SocialMisfit on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 12:25:05 AM AEST
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hmmmmm..........very deep, and very dark.........I LOVE IT!!! lol keep up the good writes.
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Re: Dying Desire
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 01:47:04 AM AEST
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i found this very well thought of, most people talk of external influences in their lament.
A well written piece.
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Re: Dying Desire
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by AndTheFoolShallBurn on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:00:31 PM AEST
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| .................in the end, emotions aside, we are to ash............ |
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Re: Dying Desire
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by assassinatorgirl on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:06:00 AM AEST
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| ...beautiful! I like all your poems that I've read but this one is my favorite! You did a really great job this poem is awesome! |
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