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Watching Myself Die
Contributed by
savedbydeath
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Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 08:10:26 PM in AEST
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dropping down,everthing goes around
i think i committed a crime again
can you tell me if i'll ever be found
please just be a man,take my hand
i just wanna die,say good-bye
i've heard so many lies
and no one has ever heard my cries
i'll say good-bye and never again say hi
watching myself die,you tell me its a crime
watching myself die,i tell you its my time
watching myself die,its fine,its ok
watching myself die,its today
you're trying to restrain me,
but i just want you to let me remain
you say i need help,but you've never
felt like this,i miss them so much
everyone says that they love me
i just wanna be so free,just let me be
i tell everyone i'm getten through
but i think they know its not true
cant fool no one,but i can be fooled
i feel like such a tool,drownding in a pool
everyone thinks i act like this to look cool
guess they're not so smart this aint no act
everything that was true to me
is no gone and i'm through
everyone who was true to me
now i'm done with you
barrying myself alive,watching myself die,
seeing me inside and out,they dont know
what this is all about,watching myself die
watching myself die,i just wanna go
watching myself die
watching myself die
watching myself die
watching myself die
watching myself die,you tell me its a crime
watching myself die,i tell you its my time
watching myself die,its fine,its ok
watching myself die,its today
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Re: Watching Myself Die
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 08:33:35 PM AEST
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i liked this, i dont agree with the wholoe concept but i understand with hard times and all, i think you did a fantastic job, it was just raw words to the point and i can especially relate to this line:
"cant fool no one,but i can be fooled",
keep up the great writing. |
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Re: Watching Myself Die
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:38:51 PM AEST
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| well i thought it was good. =] im watching myself be bored. ::sigh:: |
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Re: Watching Myself Die
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by Kavita on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:30:56 PM AEST
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Powerful.
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Re: Watching Myself Die
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by Stonedraider23 on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 08:30:37 PM AEST
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| good write i like it so what u can do the dead stuff y cant i hehe huh huh i'm watchin myself be cripple :-( u go girl |
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