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statue of a girl
Contributed by
innerbeautyqueen
on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 07:31:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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shaking fingers
soaked palms with sweat
to match the eyes
wet with saline tears
twirling stomach
in uncomfortable circles
can't compare
to the hurt in her head
the soft silent voice
that says 'he doesn't love you'
drenching the floor
with crystal liquid
warm like ashes just put out
a warmth that lies
because nothing is left
she's in transition
going back to the death she held
because he's the one who pulled her from it
and he's the one who put her back
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2004-09-19 19:31:42]
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Re: statue of a girl
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by markie on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 08:29:37 PM AEST
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sad...warm like ashes just put out
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Re: statue of a girl
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:48:51 PM AEST
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| powerful, true message. i commend you on this one. |
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Re: statue of a girl
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 10:03:30 AM AEST
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All of the emotion hurt and pain
Gurl you did it again.
Sad,but good write.
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