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When Rhyme No Longer Has Rhythm
Contributed by
Justalady
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Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 07:22:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
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When Rhyme No Longer Has Rhythm
All these pages with written words and emotion
of sunsets, sunrises and flowing oceans.
Thoughts released in simple verse and rhyme
have laid bare the feeling in this heart of mine.
Childhood memories, some bad...some good,
would I go back again .. if I could?
Many years between now and then,
no, I wouldn't want to go back again.
My days of writing have come to an end,
life is taking me around another bend,
I've shared my life and most of my dreams
What's left inside... will remain unseen.
A tiny bit of me I'll keep to myself,
it'll not be read in a book on a shelf.
Certain parts of me are private at last,
the pen no longer fits in my clasp.
Someday what's wrote may come as a shock,
when some readers see what I am.. and what I'm not.
A woman who wrote, what she felt inside,
when she had no one else to whom she could confide.
The words all truth, of hopes, passion and love
and a strong belief in the God above,
My words flowed steadily... like the endless sea,
and now like air... I've set me... free.
Author: June E. Miller (Justalady)
Copyright ©
Justalady
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2004-09-19 19:22:08]
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Re: When Rhyme No Longer Has Rhythm
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 08:07:50 PM AEST
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How beatuiful a farewell. I shall miss your thoughts and writes submitted. May you find a Peace within.
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Re: When Rhyme No Longer Has Rhythm
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by markie on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 08:31:07 PM AEST
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| really nice. I like the flow and rythem.. |
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Re: When Rhyme No Longer Has Rhythm
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by Spike on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 05:23:27 AM AEST
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Bon Voyage, adieu, fare the well, and, I hope, the pen is just put aside, not put away.
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Re: When Rhyme No Longer Has Rhythm
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 04:01:34 PM AEST
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Thank you for sharing all that you have.
This was a wonderful write, it would be a shame to lose your words forever.
Hoping you'll come back to the pen one day.
Peace. |
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Re: When Rhyme No Longer Has Rhythm
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 01:45:02 PM AEST
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this is so sad june, never quit writing, the world needs your voice, i for one, will miss you terribly, hurry back, big hugs n' love nessa
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Re: When Rhyme No Longer Has Rhythm
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 04:15:24 PM AEST
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I read this a long time ago.....and waited til I saw you on site again to tell you how beautiful it is. Your pen needs to find its voice again because I miss your incredible poetry.
Roses
Larry |
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