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What Was
Contributed by
Topgun
on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 05:41:09 PM in AEST
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Sit down
Stay awhile
All play, no rank and file
You teach me
You say you taught me
You love me
You say you loved me
Cause I'm
Livin' in the past tense
It's sublime
Livin' in the past tense
You hold me
You say you held me
You kiss me
One time you kissed me
You're an Angel
You were an Angel.
Cause I'm
Livin' in the past tense
It's sublime
Livin' in the past tense
Copyright ©
Topgun
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2004-09-19 17:41:09]
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Re: What Was
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by shelby on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 06:04:03 PM AEST
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I like your style a great poem
Michelle |
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Re: What Was
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 07:33:00 PM AEST
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Nice poem... like the style and the rhyming rhytmn of it...
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Re: What Was
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 10:06:10 PM AEST
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| well whats good now sometimes isnt good later on. |
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