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Ramblings Of A Lonely Poet
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:48:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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In forests deep of hatred scorn
Illusions true and angels born
A watered lock in gates of hell
Where pregnant fires burn and yell
Time is but a passion found
In rooms and realms without a sound
A luxury that death wont take
As deadly as a Vampires stake
Writing from where ink once lied
On pages where the poet cried
Each tear a drop of hurt and pain
Troubled thoughts one cant explain
He'll ramble on, he'll never end
Upon his honour he'll defend
This poet speaks a sense unknown
His reality is still unshown
In forests deep of hatred scorn
Illusions true and angels born
His soul has died, he'll never show it
Like Ramblings of a lonely poet
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forever_lonely
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2004-09-19 16:48:51]
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Re: Ramblings Of A Lonely Poet
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:56:20 PM AEST
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ohhh! luke this is fantastic, so beautifully written, i love it from title to last line:)
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Ramblings Of A Lonely Poet
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 05:16:14 PM AEST
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Perfection........everything about this is flawless. I have missed your writings my friend. A dark masterpiece!
Barkeep!!
Larry
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Re: Ramblings Of A Lonely Poet
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by Justalady on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 07:37:07 PM AEST
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| Sometimes more truth than fantasy is shown in the "Ramblings of a lonely poet." June |
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Re: Ramblings Of A Lonely Poet
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 05:02:37 PM AEST
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I made a comment on this once. I do so again. It saddens me that people overlook a talent such as you. This is such a powerful write and deserving of high praise, 100 reads, and 20 comments. Wake up ypdc!
Barkeep, one for my friend and I and let the others go thirsty
Larry |
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Re: Ramblings Of A Lonely Poet
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:45:29 PM AEST
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| This was beautiful..thanks for letting me read it. x X x |
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