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Living In Date Rape
Contributed by
Alina
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Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:37:46 PM in AEST
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Can you feel it
Feel the hurt
Feel your chest
Feel the dirt
Face in the mud
Life in the sinking sand
Feel the lies
'Cause he thinks he's a man
Feel the emptiness
Hear my cry
" Give her some roofies...."
" Then she can't fight !"
Waking in his bed the next morning
Not knowing what he's done
" Nothin' happened baby."
" You got drunk, passed out, it was fun."
Tusting only his word
You need him to survive
You won't go back to the street
So you force yourself to belive his lies
Can you feel it now?
Face in the water
You could have drowned.
Can you feel the hole?
The hole in your chest
Feel the emptiness
He said you were at your best !
( For Carlos Rodriguez )
Copyright ©
Alina
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2004-09-19 16:37:46]
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Re: Living In Date Rape
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by poetrygodslove on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:54:29 PM AEST
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| My goodness.... a shock. Hate that this happened to you. I hope the Lord will carry you into the future with hope and peace and love, That is what I am praying for you. I wasn't your shoes, but was there somewhat, My pain went away when I finally gave it to the Lord to take care of it.I suppose it will be there to remember but it is nice to be able to move forward and say I wont let the one that hurt me make my life miserable. the person who hurt you isn't worried about you. so you move forward and make it the best you can. I like how you expressed yourself. it helps to get it all out. God gave you a gift to get through it this way. take care. sandy |
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Re: Living In Date Rape
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by Flipped_out on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 05:04:56 PM AEST
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| Jesus doesnt watch over your drinks...so always keep your wine with you..then no one can slip anything in it...I even take mine to the ladies room... |
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Re: Living In Date Rape
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 02:07:26 PM AEST
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Oh Alina I read this poem with so much sympathy for you .........I'm so sorry this happened to you......but don't leave off where he left you....pick up the pieces and learn from this to see to it never again takes place. Don't let this ruin your life.......you're young.....still lots of time in the life's race!
Hugs, I'm so sorry
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Re: Living In Date Rape
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by emospaztic on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:06:46 PM AEST
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Wow.
I'm speechless, hope you're alright now.
-emo. |
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Re: Living In Date Rape
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by freckle on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 10:15:37 PM AEST
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Another great write...raw and so sad. I really hope that the drug abuse is not in your life in anyway...I know what it is like to live with an addict.
Carol |
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