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The Precious Moments
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:16:22 PM in AEST
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These Precious Moments
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In a sprint, there goes my son
As fast as his little legs can run
Barely as tall as a blade of grass
I chase him upstairs to get a bath
After washing the hair on his head
I start to ready him to go off to bed
Brush his teeth and dress him right
Tuck in him the covers tight
Read him a story about a little bear
Snuggled in close, to show I care
Turn off the light and whisper a song
He’ll be off to sleep before too long
This little boy in all his glory
Begs me to read another story
Of course I do, then I tell him goodnight
These precious moments makes the world seem right
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Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2004-09-19 16:16:22]
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Re: The Precious Moments
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:21:54 PM AEST
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| This poem is so so so good if and when i have kids i think it'll mean more to me yet it is still a is really nice - its like a picture something you can hold onto forever. |
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Re: The Precious Moments
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:22:01 PM AEST
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Awww Jeff.....I can only imagine......
Please hug Christian for me tonight as you put him to bed....
Great write....loved this so much....
Jenni |
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Re: The Precious Moments
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:26:34 PM AEST
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adorable!!
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Precious Moments
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by Flipped_out on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 05:29:06 PM AEST
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I feel that this poem is a little blecch
I basically found no way to identify with this piece. The lines are cliche throughout. You're not saying anything NEW here. I sense the ability to be more creative than this. Why aren't you giving your all here?
"Barely as tall as a blade of grass" like hes real small then
"After washing the hair on his head"..bad..where else..unless hes a hobbit with hairy feet
"He’ll be off to sleep before too long"...yeah I bet
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Re: The Precious Moments
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 10:25:40 PM AEST
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So cute ! You will truly understand my new poem on The crazy things Kids do!
I know this all too well! LOL! Christina |
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