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I Stand There
Contributed by
Am
on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 03:03:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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I stand there
You can tell by the look on my face....I care
My nail-polish is chipped-to-hell
Hair's tossed up in a clip, with a strawberry smell
My jean skirt's too long to be mini, but too mini to be long
By now you know you've done something wrong
My black shirt's , tough yet flirty
Brand-new white sneakers are already dirty
The fresh smell of my cheap perfume
Has actually managed to fill the room
"Of course I know what you did" I say
Glance at you, sigh, & walk away.....
Copyright ©
Am
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2004-09-19 15:03:52] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Stand There
(User Rating: 1 ) by wakegurl77 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 03:40:25 PM AEST (User
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very well written i love how you discribe the scene
short enough to just grab the reader and strong enough to tear out their heart
i love it
Allways Sincere
Leana |
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