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DREAMING OF DREAMS
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 03:00:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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"DREAMING OF DREAMS"
As a young girl I wore a bonnet full of dreams......
Embraced by roses, sunflowers, and smiles esteem
Full of hope n'er despair, goodness sewn in every seam!
Also wore my heart for to all to see, letting it beam!
And......O' the dreams, the dreams.....
Like a babbling brook, or rippling of streams!
Flowed so easily adrift in my mind
beautiful songs with lovely themes.
Someday, yes, Someday my Prince....
(dramatic) and always went to extremes!
He will be so kind, and gentle toward me,
Butterfly landing so softly with beauty.
And I, O' My Yes, I'd love him with all my soul.
Our love so endearing, so loving, so whole!
As a young woman my dreams unfold into reality.....
He would take me in his arms, with all his charms,
On top of the world we'd dance all night slowly,
Exquisite delightful peace.....without alarms.
Soar to the moon as he held me so close,
O' the dreaming of dreams n'er oppose,
As an older woman gliding on dreams cherish......
Mind's n'er grow old, dreams n'er banish!
Created by
LovingCritters
ConSue
Sept 20, 2004
"Twenty years from now you will be
more disappointed by the things that you didn't do,
than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines,
Sail away from the safe harbor, catch the trade winds in your sails,
Explore.....Dream.....Discover!!!"
~Mark Twain~
*Dreamy Smiles!*
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lovingcritters
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Re: DREAMING OF DREAMS
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by dancingcatz on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 03:03:56 PM AEST
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| you have wrote a beautiful loving poem of love and courting and the relationship between a man and a woman. i found it to be a magical story and i really enjoyed reading it. beautifully written. |
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Re: DREAMING OF DREAMS
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 03:24:11 PM AEST
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connie this is so pretty and beautiful pics too, what are dreams? aye, yeah, surely to be born we must follow them, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: DREAMING OF DREAMS
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:50:40 PM AEST
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wonderful as always
Shari |
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Re: DREAMING OF DREAMS
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by critterhideaway on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 05:23:55 PM AEST
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| Oh yes those dreams if only they come true. Very good and the pictures are sweet!! |
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Re: DREAMING OF DREAMS
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 05:28:27 PM AEST
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Only you could write something so heart warming.... ((( connie sue))) I just loved this! :o)
Roses
Larry |
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Re: DREAMING OF DREAMS
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 10:28:18 PM AEST
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| Beautiful,we all had dreams in life,some came true & some I'm still waiting on! Loved this one as all of yours! Christina |
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Re: DREAMING OF DREAMS
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by Elena on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 08:00:20 AM AEST
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Lovely poem, unfortunately... we wake up.
E |
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Re: DREAMING OF DREAMS
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by lovesucks on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:18:22 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this the pictures made it so much more visual. You have such a knack at writing I would appreciate some constructive criticism that's if you get some time. My earlier stuff is more positive you have to kind of sort thru but much appreciated.. I am reading some more of your work looking forward to what's in store.
I really liked
"Soar to the moon as he held me close
O' the dreaming of dreams n'er oppose
As an older woman gliding on dreams cherish
Minds never grow old, dreams never banish"
love it |
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Re: DREAMING OF DREAMS
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 04:36:28 PM AEST
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awwwww Thank you for sharing this
Your writes are always so insightful. |
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Re: DREAMING OF DREAMS
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by WinterFawn on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 05:41:05 AM AEST
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Always a beautiful adventure to visit your poetry!..love your graphics and this verse if so lovely and heartwarming!...where would we be if it weren't for our dreams?...
WinterFawn |
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Re: DREAMING OF DREAMS
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 02:28:55 PM AEST
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| This is a very good poem. I have an Idea for a poem based on yours. I may post it later. |
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Re: DREAMING OF DREAMS
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:52:51 AM AEST
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So many dreams we have when we're young. I encourage my daughter to go after them and learn who she is and what she wants. Men can wait. Rushing into marriage is a mistake. I don't want her completely focused on that, I just want her to know who she is and go after what she wants in life with God's guidance.
Stitch |
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Re: DREAMING OF DREAMS
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 04:20:02 PM AEST
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Very great write.
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Re: DREAMING OF DREAMS
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 06:52:44 PM AEST
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Nicely done....the pictures had a sense or dreaminess to them also. Great job.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: DREAMING OF DREAMS
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 08:47:30 AM AEST
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| wow that was a beautiful piece i really enjoyed readin your poem very nice...... |
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