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Unkept Promises
Contributed by
screwup
on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 02:51:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I called out to you
and you walked away
you turned your face
and I started to fade
I really miss you,
my friend
I have never thought
that this would be the end
I told you
one day she would take my place
you said no way
as you touchched my face
you asured me I was yours,
yours to keep
I'm now in pain
as I weep
I cut because of you
I lost you
face the truth
quit hiding behind lies
or you will witness
my demise
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2004-09-19 14:51:03]
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Re: Unkept Promises
(User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:16:22 PM AEST
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Hey Deanna....
I'll never give up on u!!! Ur too precious to me already to do that to!
U got a great write here... one can feel ur pain as they read...
Love ya
~Donna~ |
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Re: Unkept Promises
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:31:08 AM AEST
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hey!!!!
i'll NEVER give up on you either!!!
you're a good friend. |
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Re: Unkept Promises
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:07:53 PM AEST
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great poem bro...man have i been there!
summer |
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