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Breath in the Air
Contributed by
coaster
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Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 12:48:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A feeling worth more than diamonds and gold
A feeling so precious that it can't be sold
Let her lift your soul but dont be lifted to high
Cuz it can be a hard fall down but don't be shy
You can always leave babe, but stay with me
I have two blind eyes and with you I can see
Let her breath be at which you inhale
Because within true love there's no room to fail
Let the feelings out and let her feelings in
Because within this game of love it's not a crime to sin
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coaster
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2004-09-19 12:48:58]
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Re: Breath in the Air
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by pixie on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 12:50:35 PM AEST
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Ohhh this was so beautful and just the right length :)
pixie xx |
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Re: Breath in the Air
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by wakegurl77 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:22:47 PM AEST
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sooo beautiful
and soo ture
i love it
Allways Sincere
Leana |
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Re: Breath in the Air
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 09:52:00 PM AEST
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| excellent write. well rhymed and excellent rhythym. written and presented very well. |
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Re: Breath in the Air
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by b_rand on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 11:53:38 PM AEST
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| i love your style, i write the exact same way. i think this is definitely your best poem ... good metas / word play / flow it doesn't get any better |
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