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talk to me
Contributed by
the_route
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Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 06:16:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My world is confusing,
My life is a state.
My nightmares are reality,
Maybe it`s fate.
The time that i get,
I spend on my own.
Sometimes when i`m with you,
I still feel alone.
I don`t know what`s happened,
You won`t talk to me,
All that i`m asking,
Is that you will help me see.
I want to know your problems,
I`ll help work them through.
But all that i want,
Is to spend my life with you.
D.M.ALLUM
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the_route
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2004-09-19 06:16:24]
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Re: talk to me
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 06:48:54 AM AEST
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Awww. This is really sad.
Sweet too.
The ending especially caught me.
Lovely write.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: talk to me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:55:41 PM AEST
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| This is so sad. Great write though. |
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