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Stormy Ride
Contributed by
randomguy
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Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 12:27:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Dark shadows line the path.
The path around seems dark and gloomy to the passerby,
But not to me, I know where my path lays.
But it is without the one…
I sat around and pondered,
Pondered about you and I and the world that could be.
I know now that I do not get the choice,
It is fate who chooses for me.
I sit here riding to my fate,
In the most literal since you could possibly imagine.
I ride to the spot where you and I lived,
To test ourselves one more time.
Will it be our last?
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randomguy
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2004-09-19 00:27:14]
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Re: Stormy Ride
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by Chrissylee on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:43:31 AM AEST
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| i often wonder the same thing about my current relationship.. great write well done |
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Re: Stormy Ride
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by brew on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 10:00:02 AM AEST
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| I do understand , and see the thought and much more are in the write. Emotionally. |
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