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One more time
Contributed by
emocutie07
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Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 12:06:29 AM in AEST
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Im craving for something, and I know exactly what it is, Urge consumes me...one more time I say Won't lie to myself again, Glancing in the mirror I cringe deciet is my name, look away before the darkness sets in. Hollowed by my own sin, Wasting away so deep inside myself, drowning out my pleas...Won't you save me...Pull me out of this hell, but you can't hear me anymore, I'm blinded by the darkness..... I know your there, A single glimpse of hope shattered, fading back into the depths of my own bitter thoughts. What have I done? One more time I say to ease the pain. Another lie, Another thought, a single plea for life how it was before. Took all my chances made my last mistake.....Just one more time I say
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Re: One more time
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by Aquaelius on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 12:12:30 AM AEST
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Not too shabby for the car, huh? I like the constant barage of: inside, drowning, wasting lots of action... almost exciting?
Cool... |
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Re: One more time
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 12:20:08 AM AEST
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Crystal,
I don't know what you were worried about...that was really awesome...just a friendly bit of advice, after every line hit enter...to make it seem more of a poem..very awesome |
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Re: One more time
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:13:55 PM AEST
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Awesome write!!! Alot of raw emotion there!!! Very Deep!!!
~Donna~ |
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Re: One more time
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:04:47 AM AEST
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I like your style
I find it very enjoyable |
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