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The Art of Keeping Quiet
Contributed by
SoRrYifOrGot2SMiLe
on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 11:45:02 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Another Tragedy at 2:15, I can't breathe, I can't sleep, can't move, rendered hopeless from the stronghold you have over me. Unaware, Im certain, I attempt to breakdown your walls brick by brick on a daily basis neatly stacked though because I know you would have it no other way. Please dont tell me anything unpure, I'm allready so unsure of so many things, don't misconstru this as me crying out to you I've allready done that too many times before. Living life, by the words I wish I'd said, a microcosm oh how things should be, when in actuality this is the only way to express what is going on inside my head. Granted you know me better than anyone, that does not give you the right to finish my sentences, All I am is my word, All you have is my word. To keep my head above water, im drowning in a sea of irony, where as my onlice solice is writing, so I write. Carefully phrased of course, never offending, but maybe I should to let you know that the way things are going aren't so good. Well practiced in the art of keeping quiet, well practiced in the art of biting my tongue. God forbid I ever do anything wrong, say anything right. So I write, keep my mouth closed and I write.
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Re: The Art of Keeping Quiet
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 12:05:10 AM AEST
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Wow.
Very powerful and moving poem!
Thought-provoking too, might I add.
Great write!
And of course a warm WELCOME TO YPDC!!!
I hope you have a great time here...!
~kitten
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Re: The Art of Keeping Quiet
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 12:39:00 AM AEST
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well woven words, warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Art of Keeping Quiet
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by brew on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:46:08 AM AEST
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| Deep and powerful write. |
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Re: The Art of Keeping Quiet
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by Broken_Skin on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:28:15 AM AEST
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Perfect.. beautiful
5 out of 5
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