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Another While
Contributed by
wachumiri
on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 03:45:03 PM in AEST
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From you a kiss
I truly need
This much I know
'Tis true indeed
When in your arms
In your embrace
I downward gaze
Into your face
I hear your laugh
I see your smile
You've captured me
Another while
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wachumiri
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2004-09-18 15:45:03]
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Re: Another While
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 06:51:55 PM AEST
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*cough*
Erm, yes. David, has it occurred to you that we all know you love Carrie?
(just thought that needed to be said)
Your distant relation,
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Re: Another While
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by faith_my_eyes on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 07:39:14 PM AEST
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you are very physical David. Take a cold shower.
Em |
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Re: Another While
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by eatfresh22 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 10:51:11 PM AEST
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What???? You love me? Why didn't you ever say so? Kids these days...they drive me crazy!! Oh, I guess I love you too-- Yes, most definitely. Thanks for the poem.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Another While
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 02:35:51 AM AEST
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not sure about the cold shower comment! been told that myself a few times! good work.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Another While
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by thewordzwithin on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 03:04:05 PM AEST
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| Very visual! Great job! I feel a little out of the loop as far as the cold shower message in the other people's posts. I guess you guys must all be friends. Any way, good job. Great style and I'll be reading more soon.... |
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Re: Another While
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 11:02:33 AM AEST
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| Short and very sweet. Cheers! |
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Re: Another While
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by Archie on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 11:43:11 AM AEST
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| This is good. I like the simplicity of your words that draw unto a deeper meaning. Great write. |
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Re: Another While
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by anitajames on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 10:31:58 AM AEST
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| Another poem, another smile. Love becomes you. |
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Re: Another While
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:34:40 AM AEST
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Short, simple and sweet. Carrie is one lucky lady to have such a loving guy like u David. May u both have a lifetime of happiness together. Your words are sincere and heartfelt. Well done dear friend.
*hugs*
Sue |
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