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pieces of me
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
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Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 11:28:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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im fading
noone knows my deepest sins
noone knows my flaws and dirt
but only you know me
tiny pieces
collect them like a puzzle
and you might be able to tell me apart
together were beautiful
seperated were dirt and worthless
find me
fix me
and glue me forever
with supa' lova' sticky tape
i love how you can tell
the pieces of me apart
Copyright ©
Hannah_Heaven
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2004-09-18 11:28:38]
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Re: pieces of me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jolly on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 11:57:25 AM AEST
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| really cleaver..wait, that's a cooking thing..clever? yeah that's it..lol |
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Re: pieces of me
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by pixie on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 11:57:56 AM AEST
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a very well expressed emotional write,
pixie xx |
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