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Choices
Contributed by
Heartfilledblood
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Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 02:41:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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His day done at school
This kid never the fool
His day has been grand
He made first in the band
Everything's so great
He even has a date
His friend to show him something neet
In the park down the street
As his friend pulls out a bag
He asks, "Want a drag"
"No thanks I think ill pass"
"No need to ruin a start to what I can look back as one awsome past"
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Heartfilledblood
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2004-09-18 02:41:40]
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Re: Choices
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 10:06:39 AM AEST
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EXCELLENT! I really enjoyed this one.
Great poem and a perfect message.
Well done!
~Breezy |
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Re: Choices
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:34:03 AM AEST
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I LOVE the mesage in this, if only others would realize too.
A great poem,
Short but sweet, people say.
Keep it up.
Much love,
Phil xxx |
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Re: Choices
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by shorty_52 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 11:38:24 AM AEST
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good write babe. i know that u read it to me yesterday but it is a really good poem.
i love u
~allyson~ |
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