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Everest
Contributed by
MomentInTime
on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 01:25:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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When will enough be ever enough
can you elucidate this point?
Is there an Everest to be climbed
to reach the top, and there to find
the need to do it once again
lest the first climb is in vain?
And if you are to climb your mountain
till you reach the very top
and there to feel so disappointed
for the fact you’ve had to stop,
looking at the sky above
another mountain you may see,
it may be best not try and climb it,
this one may be imaginary.
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Re: Everest
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by Pyrofungus on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 08:39:36 PM AEST
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awesome write bro awesome!
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: Everest
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 05:22:08 PM AEST
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Great job!
Sorry, but I gotta keep climbing, guess I won't know if it's imaginary till I try, and if not disapointment...perhaps joy? or at best enlightenment?
Unless its at the expense of others.
Anyway, see? you got me on my soap box here....:)
Again nicely done. |
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Re: Everest
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 05:19:24 AM AEST
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| Reminds me of a song..Peggy Lee I think.."Is that all There is?"...Great song. Great Poem. Thought I'd read something that was "neutral" lol... |
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Re: Everest
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 02:29:57 AM AEST
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| this is soo cool MIT! YOu always write the most inspiring things |
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