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Break My Mold
Contributed by
waos
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Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 12:31:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Plastic image upon a billboard
as you rise from the water...
stare at the mirror and
paste a plastic smile on your face
as you smash your fist,
to shatter broken glass.
Break the mold
and let the jagged edges
shatter you too.
Tread upon the shattered glass
with it watching over your shoulder...
following you.
Trailer park traveller
in smoking remains.
Burn the scarecrow's straw brain,
straw blood.
Let go and
break the mold.
Hold the child crying in death's remains
to comfort with what you
did not receive...
break the mold.
Let it burn...
burn away you.
Let it shatter,
shatter you.
Become less of me
and more of you.
Copyright ©
waos
... [
2004-09-18 00:31:43]
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Re: Break My Mold
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 05:09:20 AM AEST
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this is strange and unusual, but great all the same.
good poem.
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Re: Break My Mold
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by Aika on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 05:40:50 AM AEST
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WEll, I had to read this twice, very interesting piece:-) WEll written, "Become less of me
and more of you." I loved this end!!! Great expressions! with love, aika:-) |
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Re: Break My Mold
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:47:19 AM AEST
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This is interesting, definatly unusual, and very good. lol.
Some of the best poems are like this. They make you think.
Great flow, great words, great write.
Much love,
Phil xxx
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