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Crooked Angel
Contributed by
poetic_ire
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Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 10:01:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Falling Falling
down a seemingly bottomless pit
no one to pull the angel from
the desolate hole of her tradgedy
no one to offer words of comfort
millions of hands reach for her
millions of hands try to grab for her
no one can get ahold of this black winged angel
Her halo crooked dented and smugged
by the wolves in the sheeps clothing
blood tears line her face
Fighting within herself
and black rage deeper then the pit
of despair she has come to know as home
Falling Falling, down a bottomless pit,
Never again to see the light of day.
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Re: Crooked Angel
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 10:26:11 PM AEST
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beautifully expressed, warm welcome to ypdc too:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Crooked Angel
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 10:44:54 PM AEST
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| interesting, seeing yourself as angel, at least it shows you see something beautiful within yourself, no matter what situation |
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Re: Crooked Angel
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 11:05:47 PM AEST
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| Awsome poem, very emotionally written with so vivid , it leaves lasting images. |
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Re: Crooked Angel
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by brokensoul on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 11:26:38 PM AEST
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| Liz that was really good!! i loved it!! |
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Re: Crooked Angel
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by flamingblade on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 07:47:39 PM AEST
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huh
sounds like stuff ive been musing about lately
nice! |
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