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Blowin Bubbles in my Bathtub
Contributed by
poetic_ire
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Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 09:57:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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-x[ This is the first poem I ever wrote. After my father abused me... i took a bath as if to wash myself clean... I thought of this poem in the bathtub...wondering what it would feel like to drown myself. I was fifteen]x-
Blowin Bubbles in my bathtub
No where to go, no where to hide,
My faith is put aside
Do I really need to say good-bye to the people I thought cared?
The only way out for me is the darkness of the night
So, go away I don't need you, you don't need me
Knives in my back and stakes through my heart
I bleed invisable blood
You only see what you want to see
You don't want to see what is really there
How can I blame you? But I can't be blind
I am there
I scream in a crowded room
No one hears my cries for help
How can they not hear my pain?
For it's so loud in my ears
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Re: Blowin Bubbles in my Bathtub
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by Sirena_Degana on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 10:16:37 PM AEST
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this poem is very good..very touching
good write
blessed be
sirena
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Re: Blowin Bubbles in my Bathtub
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 10:51:46 PM AEST
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| interesting, i know how u feel to be so depressed at such a young age, im only 14 now and i was most suicidal at 12 |
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Re: Blowin Bubbles in my Bathtub
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 11:17:55 PM AEST
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Awesome and vivid, I can feel the pain and anguish in each word, dont know why others are deaf to the agony portrayed in this poem.
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Re: Blowin Bubbles in my Bathtub
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by amsy on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 11:19:15 PM AEST
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hi
very moving poem..sorry bout what happend 2 you..god bless |
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Re: Blowin Bubbles in my Bathtub
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by brokensoul on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 11:28:51 PM AEST
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| I never new that you were abused that was great that was your first poem?? |
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