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Intertwined Worlds

Contributed by solnubis on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 09:17:11 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

I’m sitting on the sofa next to a wonderful man
as he places his arm around my shoulders.
We are in front of a bright glowing fire admiring its beauty.
I am letting him into my heart.
He is caressing my inner most soul.
I am willingly opening up to this new revelation.
He does not realize that this incredible sensational emotion
that I am feeling is the first for me.
He leans his head next to mines
and moves in closer as our bodies join to one.
I start to tremble, my body is reacting to a new found expression of love.

I push back a little, fear starts to overwhelm me.
I start to ripple at the seams.
Everything seems to be falling apart.
This sensation I have felt it before.
It was many years ago in a small size body,
when my self did not know how to respond to this type of touch.
It was suppose to be an expression of love
but looking back and remembering all I felt was,
the pain and the confusion of an unknown touch.
Two worlds apart that seem to be forever intertwining.
I weep for that lost innocence.

Copyright Â© solnubis ... [ 2004-09-17 21:17:11]
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Re: Intertwined Worlds (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 05:05:34 PM AEST
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this was such a confessional style of poem i couldn't stop reading this - it was such a powerful descriptive poem - superb!

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